Exploring the self is through the attachments we form with our inner selves.
Place attachments are formed through experience.
There are many factors that deeply bond us with that place.
Place attachments are formed through experience.
There are many factors that deeply bond us with that place.
Finally, you are able to know how and why I am attached to Souq Waqif in an organized writing. I also inserted photos that are related to each idea. This final draft might not be a perfect one, but I am proud of the final result.
I fixed a lot on my second draft. I had a wider vision of place attachments and what the factors are. I organized it in a way a reader will not be lost while reading it.
My first draft was highly unorganized. I added plenty of unnecessary ideas that are not found on the second and final drafts. I did not fully understand why and how I was deeply attached to the place. On the looks side, I used bold and italics were they are unprofessional and hard to be read.