Annotated Bibliography |
Researched Argument |
Annotated bibliography provides summary and analysis of different websites focusing on the discrimination against Syrian refugees in Lebanon.
I wrote about how each source ended their study and/or article. The sources are more analyzed now. I wrote in the synthesis how analyzing the sources changed the way I think.
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A researched argument also focusing the scapegoating discourses from political parties that shifted the blame of their exploitation and economic crisis on Syrian refugees in Lebanon.
I added transition sentences to be easier to be read. I also suggested some possible solutions that can prevent the discrimination against Syrian refugees.
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Falsely chosen articles were removed, and placed with the right ones. Synthesis was added to this draft. Second draft lacked analyzing of logos, pathos and ethos.
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General to specific was applied to this draft. Conclusion is much strengthened. Personal experiences were added to the research. Suitable title was added
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Variety of sources were analyzed through their credibility. Two sources were opinion articles, but analyzed as news article. First time writing annotated bibliography, so it came as incoherent.
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The structure of introduction was weak. The body paragraphs were not organized. The topic and references were strong.
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