A comparative analysis of two websites of an old city and a future one.
Each city's website differ in purpose, targeted audience, and content.
What is a city of future? How does it differ from the present one?
Each city's website differ in purpose, targeted audience, and content.
What is a city of future? How does it differ from the present one?
The websites are completely analyzed. Pathos, logos and ethos are taken into consideration more. Conclusion is now strong along with the introduction. All targeted audience are now mentioned. Title is changed to a much more powerful one.
With all their differences that keep them apart. Each of their purpose, audience and focus is more thoroughly discussed. Logos, pathos and ethos are deeply considered and now explained wider. The confusing sentences that are hard to read are removed.
What is Neom? How does it differ from Beirut? Two Arab cities that differ widely by comparing their two websites.
In my first draft, I was lost in Beirut's targeted audience. I also found hard time to find the suitable words for its purpose.
In my first draft, I was lost in Beirut's targeted audience. I also found hard time to find the suitable words for its purpose.